Here are some more of these thoughts I have while reading, I haven’t been good at keeping up and posted so there is a back log of comments. Enjoy!
-Let’s go walk into a cave with the people literally trying to abduct and murder you because that is smart
-Such a waste of bullets
-MC never wears heels but when she does, she walks for over an hour in them. Because of course she does. Sadly this part was written by a woman….
-Everyone is poor yet everyone can buy virtual shit in the game?
-*Eats cookies in the middle of a battle scene that talks about pus constantly*
-Now we get to the whiny cis white het male teenager, but he’s poor and somewhat overweight so we are supposed to relate to him. Author also added a dash of being bullied so it’s all good. *eye roll*
-That’s smart, light the entire building on fire with everyone of your group inside it
-Tidy romantic ending that solves nothing about the terrible world
-Talk about not being the investigators yet there is a section on her questioning witnesses to figure out if a death is a homicide instead of the detectives. Ugh I hate inconsistencies like this.
-Talk of living in parent’s basements ignore the fact that in this world people don’t have basements anymore
-Buddy never thought to control+f his diary for key words that would have solved this entire puzzle in like 5 minutes?? Why are whiny white male leads the main characters again, when they are consistently this stupid?
-Indentured servitude is creepy
–[Annoyance that an entire court case rests on the fact that when you fall backward your hands automatically move to behind you, not fly up as if to grab onto something, which I have totally done when I have slipped in the shower and as a result did not break my arm]
-I love how the bully of this story is a large part of why the main character became so good at weapons. It’s a little sad that only the main character really knows this as well. I would have loved to have a scene were the MC straight up tells the a-hole that her superior strength is because if forced her to use weighted weapons.